2009年3月31日星期二

Exploration Essay Plan

Introduction:

Thesis Statement:
exploration is so important to us. We can't improve without exploration. We can't update our technology without exploration. Without the exploration, we can do nothing that makes us stronger .because of the exploration; the human can improve step by step.

B.P.1.

Without the exploration, there will be no America.
Columbus Found the New land
.without him. America will
disappear...

B.P.2

We use the gas, oil, energy now it's all does not exist many years ago. People never stop to explore the place.
So the total is. we have a very good life because of these

resources.

B.P.3

Now, we know there were 8 plants in the Solar system. Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune. How do you know? That’s because of the Spirit of exploration. We lunch the rocket and spaceship. Send the Astronauts to everywhere (if they can get back).

Conclusion:

exploration is so important to us, or country..